As the Great Depression demolished the family funds and the Dust Bowl destroyed the family crops, plantation owners took full advantage of the desperate situations. Knowing that everyone was desperate for work, these owners compromised a fair wage to maximize corporate profit. The Joad family in Grapes of Wrath was no exception to this selfishness, as they embarked on a strenuous journey to California where they believed they could find decent wages. Through alternating languages and numerous details of the story that recounts their journey, John Steinback masterfully blends the social issue of greed into his novel and makes his audience realize how superficial the American dream truly is.
The plot includes few happy moments for the Joad family. The first Joad family member we meet is someone who has been convicted for homicide. As we follow him on his way back home, Tom Joad finds his old house empty. A neighbor tells him that they were evicted, and are at his Uncle’s house. Even from the start, we as readers are exposed to greed through the ousting of the Joads out of their home. With Steinback’s numerous details about how the landowners cut costs by replacing the Joad family with a large tractor, he makes us despise large wealthy landowners and sympathize with families like the Joads who have been cheated of their American dream.
But things only escalate in difficulty as the actual voyage out west starts. The Joad family encounters numerous hardships, including the deaths of both grandparents. However, to heighten the struggle of the Joad family that the readers perceive, the narrator of the story often strays from telling the main story of the Joad family. The narrator changes from the neutral narrator to the lively language of a greedy car salesman, juxtaposing the poor families traveling out west with the people who are making a profit off of their struggles. By seeing both sides of the corrupter and the cheated, we as an audience feel even more pity for the families trying to earn enough to gain the stereotypical American dream of a house, car, and land. We see the disillusionment just as they see it.
In conclusion, John Steinback criticizes the American dream by incorporating greed into his novel. By manipulating language, he masterfully portrays salesmen, landowners, and corporations as antagonizing forces against the common people. Steinback truly makes us question whether or not the American dream is an achievable goal or a shallow facade.
Very nice job with this second Open Prompt! I would have perhaps liked to see the prompt itself to see what exactly you are answering, but I found that I was able to gather most of what I needed to determine that your essay is a well constructed one. In particular I noticed the strength of your thesis, very well thought out!
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ReplyDeleteI like the way that you incorporated meaning into your thesis: “…makes his audience realize how superficial the American dream truly is.”
I also like your whole introductory paragraph. I think that it is well constructed and well organized.
Your first body paragraph is also good, and it stays focused on the example that you use. However, I would add something in there to address how the meaning/message of the piece is conveyed. Right now, I know that the author makes readers despise large landowners, but how does that make the readers realize how superficial the American dream is? You need to mention that.
A not with regards to organization: Your thesis only mentions how Steinbeck incorporates greed into the novel, and never mentions the portrayal of salesmen, landowners, and corporations as antagonizing forces. Because of this, your second body paragraph came as a surprise to me. I wasn’t expecting a paragraph on that topic. If you are going to mention something that important in your essay, it needs to be introduced in the thesis so the reader knows what to expect.
Wow, your conclusion is great. You really excel at taking your whole essay down to a few sentences, and also including the meaning/message of the piece. Really, great job on that.
I also expected no promt, but be sure to include it beause it makes it a lot easier to critique if I know the objective. Great introduction and thesis! I like your style of writing! Also your piece flowed very nicely so kudos to you! Wonderful essay!
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